Critique please.

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Chris
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Critique please.

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Well, I'm at near completion of the programming end and have started some designing. I would like some critique on the main page, I made everything myself, but I'm not sure if it's original enough.

Also tell me if you guys find the images take too long to load.

http://lodire.com/

Cheers!
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I really like the setup of the page. Kudos, very nicely done
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Jackolantern
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Very nice! Only critique I could offer would be that the text in the two lower boxes ("Update" and "Activity") are a bit hard to read the with dark background. If the text was brought up a bit in hue I think it would really help out its readability. Other than that, looking very good! :)
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Thanks Jack! I thought the text was a little big too, I don't want to to stand out too much though, what do you think of it now?
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Looking good, altthought the date in the updates box is almost not readable.
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Falken wrote:Looking good, altthought the date in the updates box is almost not readable.
Yeah, that is the only other thing. Besides, that looking awesome!
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yes very nice!
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Recent activity on the website:
Someone took a dump.
And then later...
It smelled bad.
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Looks very nice indeed.
I like the gold/yellow against the bluey/topaz background, really makes it stand out. :D
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